My Second Presentation with Class Feedback

Positive Feedback :)

Logo good because it was green which ties in the with idea of her campaign and the environment.

 Video shows how bad the field is at the moment.

Good ideas, very good presentation. Answered all questions within the presentation. Ideas presented clearly and linked back to the brief.

Good clear presentation. Understood her ideas she explained them well.

 Good eye contact with the audience. Logo was good linked with her name. Posters were good, said what was on the posters.

Really good and clear presentation with lots of information and good ideas. Covered every area of the campaign and explained points well

Clear presentation, good selection of music and rhythm of photos to match and clearly got her message across 

I like Milly's presentation, i think she worked really well on her own and added a lot of information.

Very interesting presentation with an entertaining video to show exactly what the idea is. Well done!

Negative Feedback :(

 Could speak clearer

Writing on video too quick to read and take in.

She could have used her own photography.

Perhaps speak a bit louder

A bit too much talking 

maybe change colours of the logo as its hard to see

This will influence my campaign as I will edit the video to make the writing move slower and edit the music to make it sound better.